SUMMARY OF EDITS FOR CHAPTER TWELVE
Apart
from a small arrow indicating that the start of the first paragraph should be
against the left hand margin, a missing question mark and one small typo, this
chapter didn’t draw any criticism from my editor. At first glance it seemed
that it required almost no work at all. Appearances can be deceptive.
This
chapter marks the midpoint in the story. It is where something happens to set
the MC off on a new path. In the first draft, the MC became less proactive from
this point on. This was the main issue which needed to be addressed when I set
about revising.
Because
of changes I’d made to earlier chapters, much of what I’d written became
redundant and so I cut out almost 80% of the original text.
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