SUMMARY OF EDITS ON CHAPTERS TWO AND THREE

Chapter Two required far less rewriting than the first. The main aim was to enhance what I already had. Here is a summary of what I did to improve it. I reinstated a paragraph of text I’d cut out. I changed a reference to something into a full scene. I added further detail to make one scene more interesting. I changed the odd word here and there.

Chapter Three remains much the same as I originally wrote it.  The main changes to the first draft include the omission of some unnecessary text. I brought the MC into one scene at an earlier stage. I tidied up some of the dialogue tags. I changed the odd word here and there.

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