SUMMARY OF EDITS ON CHAPTERS TWO AND THREE
Chapter Two required far less rewriting than the first. The
main aim was to enhance what I already had. Here is a summary of what I did to
improve it. I reinstated a paragraph of text I’d cut out. I changed a reference
to something into a full scene. I added further detail to make one scene more
interesting. I changed the odd word here and there.
Chapter
Three remains much the same as I originally wrote it.
The main changes to the first draft include the omission of some unnecessary
text. I brought the MC into one scene at an earlier stage. I tidied up some of
the dialogue tags. I changed the odd word here and there.
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