SUMMARY OF EDITS ON CHAPTER ONE

Here is a summary of what I did to improve Chapter One:


  • Experimented with different starting points until I found one I liked.
  • Wrote a brand new first scene to add more tension and drama.
  • Deleted the whole of the second scene because it did nothing to advance the plot.
  • Added extra detail to the character descriptions and actions to give a better sense of who they are.
  • Added further incidents to the final scene to give it more oomph.


I am quite pleased with the results. Well, at least for now.

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