SUMMARY OF EDITS ON CHAPTER ONE
Here is a summary of what I did to improve Chapter One:
I am quite pleased with the results. Well, at least for now.
- Experimented with different starting points until I found one I liked.
- Wrote a brand new first scene to add more tension and drama.
- Deleted the whole of the second scene because it did nothing to advance the plot.
- Added extra detail to the character descriptions and actions to give a better sense of who they are.
- Added further incidents to the final scene to give it more oomph.
I am quite pleased with the results. Well, at least for now.
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