SUMMARY OF EDITS TO CHAPTER TWENTY THREE
This was
the final chapter and drew just one comment from my editor. That was about how
the MC reacted to one particular discovery she made after the climax to the
story. My editor was quite right and I made changes to this to show the MC
behaving in a more believable manner.
Just with
other parts of the MS which didn’t draw much comment from my editor, I found
myself making changes. Although this chapter is still recognisable when
compared to the original draft, it has been fleshed out to include some more
interesting detail. It includes one small scene not found in the MS my editor
read and this helps to set up the story line for the sequel.
Is this
the end of the story about my editing endeavours? Hell no, we’re not even
halfway there yet.
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