SUMMARY OF EDITS TO CHAPTER TWENTY THREE

This was the final chapter and drew just one comment from my editor. That was about how the MC reacted to one particular discovery she made after the climax to the story. My editor was quite right and I made changes to this to show the MC behaving in a more believable manner.

Just with other parts of the MS which didn’t draw much comment from my editor, I found myself making changes. Although this chapter is still recognisable when compared to the original draft, it has been fleshed out to include some more interesting detail. It includes one small scene not found in the MS my editor read and this helps to set up the story line for the sequel.

Is this the end of the story about my editing endeavours? Hell no, we’re not even halfway there yet.



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